“A Feast For The Imagination”
As a writer of adult fiction like cops and robbers, you can always build tension. Setting scenes and establishing motives for older readers provides that opportunity.
Writing a children’s book has to be simple enough for a child to read. It also needs to be engaging enough to hold their attention.
I’ve just finished writing my first children’s book. I sent the draft to my editor.
Life as a freelance journalist is always unpredictable. As Rachel browsed through her emails, the topic line of one email in particular got her attention:
SENSITIVE FILES-CAVES POINT LIGHTHOUSE-12 NOON
Looking at her watch she said, “blast, it’s 2 o’clock!.
Sensing a scoop is in the air, she decided it was worth a drive to check it out.
Arriving at Caves Point, she left her vehicle in the deserted carpark. She made her way along the foreshore road. This road led to the lighthouse on the cliff above.
“Hell, I hate heights”, she whispered to herself as she started the steep, awkward ascent. The sound of waves crashing onto the rocks below muffled her heavy breathing and echoing footsteps.
A chill ran down her spine as she opened the lighthouse door and groped the handrail. The musty smell of mold made her feel nauseous. She looked up at the encircling tower. Then she began to climb the tapered shaped staircase.
She reached the top of the stairway and paused to catch her breath. Then she turned the rusty old door handle to the lighthouse keeper’s chamber. The creaking of the heavy door unnerved her. The pungent sea spray mixed with stale tobacco heightened her senses. The gust of wind made her both fearful and hesitant.
She entered and observed the sparse room. It contained an old broken table, a putrid mug, a small envelope covered in dust, and a spy glass.
Fumbling in her bag for her latex gloves, she quickly put them on and began examining the envelope. Other than an old piece of faded parchment folded neatly in two the envelope was empty.
“Someone is coming”, she whispered to herself as a man appeared at the doorway.
With nowhere to hide, Rachel waited for a moment before making a run for it. As he grabbed her they both slipped on the damp floor. Twisting and kicking she managed to free herself from his grip escaping to the outside observation deck via a clanging door.
He followed her outside. Arming herself with an old chair she swung it in his direction striking his head. Disorientated, he lost his balance and tumbled over the railing.
Snatching the envelope she fled the room. Rachel’s heavy footsteps resounded the walls as she ran down the stairs. Exiting the lighthouse, she gaped at his lifeless body lying on the rocks.
The envelope was safely tucked away in her bag. She found her car keys. She shakily started the engine and drove away.
It was a little after 7 pm when she arrived home. Two men suddenly emerged from a car parked across the road. Guns drawn one man stood guard while the other pointed his gun directly to her head. “I think you have something that belongs to me!” he said.
Thank you for reading my blog.
One of my readers who is not on social media who bought The Belltrees Incident Series, THE BUNKER and DECEPTION gave me a favourable review.
Thank you Brian
REVIEW
First time reading this author’s work, The Bunker & Deception, and was pleasantly surprised by her ability to tell a good story in a very readable and enjoyable way, particularly with an unusual plot. Looking forward to reading her next work.
One of my readers gave me a favourable review.
Thank you Merril
This book is the second of “The Belltrees Incident“. The first was itself intriguing and full of twists and turns. Now, the second is so fast paced, engaging and there are more twists and turns. It keeps you guessing until the very last page. Read the two novellas together and you’ll have a cracking journey. Very enjoyable!
5 stars. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I would to thank everyone that has continued to support me by buying a copy of the Belltrees Incident – THE BUNKER & DECEPTION book series.
Together we have raised another $30 which has been donated to my favourite charity Cancer Council NSW.
I would like to thank everyone that has supported me by buying a copy of The Belltrees Incident – THE BUNKER & DECEPTION book series.
Together we have raised another $60 which has been donated to my favourite charity Cancer Council NSW.
One of my readers who is not on social media who had bought book 1 of The Belltrees Incident THE BUNKER also purchased book 2 DECEPTION and gave me a favourable review.
I thought the story inventive. The way the author unfolded the story by way of clues in each chapter kept me interested.
Thank you Barbara
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